What does a person have to do around here to trust people. Its like your whole life and secrets are put in a book that everyone can read. You think you know people but you don't, they'll end up spilling things to people that you don't want. Next thing you know every one knows. So why can't people just be trustworthy? Well enough to understand to keep those secrets locked up. To tie the box shut. To take it to the grave. Why?
I like how realistic this piece is. It would make sense to everyone to because everyone has this problem on trust. Good work!
ReplyDeleteAbby, this was so sad. I agree that so many people just spill out secrets without thinking. I also agree with Hannah that this piece is really realistic. I loved this piece. Great job and continue writing.
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