I am lost in the dark,
The darkness seemed to be everywhere,
The darkness was roaring,
And I was scared
The trees were now cackling,
I called and called,
But no one came,
And I was scared
The cunning wind is now thirsty,
I can smell the laughing of a skunk,
There is now tears dripping down my face,
And I was scared
I can nearly see the merciless door,
The hungry floor is creaking,
I hoped I was near the end,
And I was scared
I liked how you ended every line with ' I was scared'. You had a lot of voice put into this piece and I thought it described darkness well.
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